A Conversation for Conversation

Alternative Writing Workshop: A16760711 - 'Conversation' (poem)

Post 1

Phoeniks

Entry: 'Conversation' (poem) - A16760711
Author: Phoeniks - U6128934

This is just a poem I wrote a while back and it's been kicking around on My Space for a while until someone suggested I submitted it to the Alternative Writing Workshop.


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Post 2

U168592

I see you figured out how to get it here smiley - winkeye

You have some nice imagery, and I enjoyed the ideas of what you've said and the references to other aspects of romance smiley - ok

Would like to see some more if you've got it in there - there's a light hiding under a bushel I feel smiley - smiley


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Post 3

Phoeniks


Yeah- I engaged my initiative drive!

Thanks for the praise! It was basically about a conversation with this guy.....complicated, but we were saying all this stuff and all I was noticing were the things around us, like I was out of my body.

You have definately inspired me to submit more stuff to the Alt. Writing Workshop!

See ya around smiley - smiley

Phoeniks


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Post 4

U1250369


I loved this poem, Phoeniks. It was funny, romantic and left me wanting to know more.

I look forward to reading more from you


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Post 5

Phoeniks

Hi again, and thank you again!
[I replied to 'No title' message first]

x


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Post 6

Phoeniks

What do u mean, you want to know more......? Let me know and I might tell you....smiley - smiley


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Post 7

U1250369


I meant I would like to read more of your stuff


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Post 8

Phoeniks

Oh, ok. I'll get writing.....smiley - biro

Yay thanks! smiley - biggrin

Phoeniks
x


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Post 9

U1250369



And I just read your personal space and you sound a great person !


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Post 10

Phoeniks


Wow!! Thank you! You seem cool too- having a passion for something is really good, and animals are great! I have two cats called Rhubarb and Eric (loooooong story) and I love them to pieces!!

x


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Post 11

U1250369


I won't asksmiley - smiley

How are you getting on in hoo too ? You seem to be getting around realy well


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Post 12

Phoeniks

Yeah, I'm doing pretty good. Can you tell I'm new?...


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Post 13

U168592

She's had some excellent tour-guides smiley - winkeyesmiley - laugh

Glad you're enjoying yourself Pheoniks - as Chips said, like to see more of your writing smiley - ok

Why not pop by <./>ThePost</.> too if you like? They're always on the look out for poets and anyone really who has something to share smiley - smiley

Plus the Editing team of emr and Shazz are fantastic. Welcoming and keen as the proverbial sauce that goes with ham. smiley - biggrin


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Post 14

U1250369

I agree with everything Matt's said.

On your page, it says you were created 21 October 2006 - that's how I know you're new smiley - chick


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Post 15

Phoeniks


Cool thanks for the support guys! It's like one big family!!smiley - wahsmiley - biggrin


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Post 16

U168592

hmm. well yes, but who's the smiley - blacksheep???


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Post 17

Phoeniks


I would imagine there are many within the h2g2 clan. I'm probably one!smiley - smiley baaaa.....


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Post 18

Phoeniks


And what proverbial sauce?


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Post 19

U168592

mint? that goes with lamb smiley - tongueoutsmiley - drool

(mustard - keen as mustard smiley - winkeye)


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Post 20

Phoeniks


Ahhh. gotcha.


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