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Alternative Writing Workshop: A16760711 - 'Conversation' (poem)
Phoeniks Started conversation Nov 10, 2006
Entry: 'Conversation' (poem) - A16760711
Author: Phoeniks - U6128934
This is just a poem I wrote a while back and it's been kicking around on My Space for a while until someone suggested I submitted it to the Alternative Writing Workshop.
A16760711 - 'Conversation' (poem)
U168592 Posted Nov 10, 2006
I see you figured out how to get it here
You have some nice imagery, and I enjoyed the ideas of what you've said and the references to other aspects of romance
Would like to see some more if you've got it in there - there's a light hiding under a bushel I feel
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Phoeniks Posted Nov 10, 2006
Yeah- I engaged my initiative drive!
Thanks for the praise! It was basically about a conversation with this guy.....complicated, but we were saying all this stuff and all I was noticing were the things around us, like I was out of my body.
You have definately inspired me to submit more stuff to the Alt. Writing Workshop!
See ya around
Phoeniks
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U1250369 Posted Nov 10, 2006
I loved this poem, Phoeniks. It was funny, romantic and left me wanting to know more.
I look forward to reading more from you
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Phoeniks Posted Nov 10, 2006
Hi again, and thank you again!
[I replied to 'No title' message first]
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U1250369 Posted Nov 10, 2006
I meant I would like to read more of your stuff
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U1250369 Posted Nov 10, 2006
And I just read your personal space and you sound a great person !
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Phoeniks Posted Nov 10, 2006
Wow!! Thank you! You seem cool too- having a passion for something is really good, and animals are great! I have two cats called Rhubarb and Eric (loooooong story) and I love them to pieces!!
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A16760711 - 'Conversation' (poem)
Phoeniks Posted Nov 11, 2006
Yeah, I'm doing pretty good. Can you tell I'm new?...
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U168592 Posted Nov 11, 2006
She's had some excellent tour-guides
Glad you're enjoying yourself Pheoniks - as Chips said, like to see more of your writing
Why not pop by <./>ThePost</.> too if you like? They're always on the look out for poets and anyone really who has something to share
Plus the Editing team of emr and Shazz are fantastic. Welcoming and keen as the proverbial sauce that goes with ham.
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U1250369 Posted Nov 11, 2006
I agree with everything Matt's said.
On your page, it says you were created 21 October 2006 - that's how I know you're new
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