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http://www.h2g2.com/463691 the Sedgwick Geological Trail is one place
about which the world wide web says practically nothing. Here is a
chance for h2g2 to get there first. I personally visited the place.
Here is what I have to say on it.

The title of this thread is improperly formatted. I recommend that this thread is moved to the Sin Bin.

Apart from some spelling mistakes, and several bits of iffy formatting (capitals in headers, newlines at beginning of paragraphs, etc) and the fact that the link you posted doesn't work (http://www.h2g2.com/A463691 - this one will)...


..it's a pretty good article actually. But some more info on the actual geology would be nice. And possibly a description of what the walk is like.

also, you should never put anything in 1st person(that's saying I, me, we,us, etc.). for some reason the editors don't like that.

This Conversation has been moved to the Peer Review Sin Bin because it's not in the right format - the subject of the Conversation doesn't contain the title of the recommended entry.

This is not a comment on the quality of the entry, purely the format of this Conversation. If you'd like to post another one to the Peer Review page in the right format, then that'd be fine.

You also might like to read the guidelines at http://www.h2g2.com/Writing-Guidelines for the editorial stance on the first person. It's not just a case of the editors not liking it 'for some reason'...

Thanks.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Sedgwick Geological Trail'.

Back to Entry - this became Edited Entry A593606 Sedgwick Geological Trail