h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.h2g2.com/A461675
my main reason for recomending my artical is to get feedback.
i'm no writer,i'm no computer wiz i can't even add the red highlights and pictures that every one else seems to.
but this is straight from the heart.
it's about ethics,it's about freedom and the responsibility that goes with it,it's about social and individual attitudes,it's my personal opinion on one assumed right of man that sorley needs changing and how to change it.

first things first - reread http://www.h2g2.com/PeerReview - you've not posted this in the correct format, which will half the number of responses, and reduce your chances of making the guide to around a tenth of normal.

This entry falls foul of two of the writing guidelines, which can be found at http://www.h2g2.com/writing-guidelines
4. Be Instructive, Informative and Factual
9. Try to be Well-balanced

In addition it falls foul of the style guidelines, which can be found at http://www.h2g2.com/SubEditors-Style
-> Write the entry in the third person
-> Generally, try not to use loads and loads of capitals (Ie, "B**STARDS")

While entries like this are superb as part of the unedited guide, and help give the depth of opinion that is so clearly required - they aren't appropriate for edited status, I'm afraid.

what do you mean by format?
as in not posted in the correct format.
i am interested in anything that might half or double the number of replys

If you read the peer review page, it will tell you that (amongst other things) all postings to peer review should have a subject something like "A123456 - Copper".

Tha's what I mean

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Where GOD went wrong'.

Back to Entry - this is an opinion piece.