h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I wrote this entry as a brief guide to an essential piece of Australian culture. I'm pretty sure it should be kosher for editing, but even if it isn't I would appreciate any comments/criticism that are forthcoming. Cheers, Ooroo BFM.

Sorry here is the page link
http://www.h2g2.com/A435034

Sounds like my kind of comedy

I enjoyed this entry, but I have a few suggestions:
1) Give the dates of when it was aired (start & finish)
2) Include a list of some of the best in-jokes
3) Is there a web site you could link to?

Hope that helps

I have to agree with Wonky here - it's good stuff, but I feel it needs a few more facts - you get across the *feel* of the series well, I think - but a fansite and a rough idea of when it was shown would help the entry come across as much more authoritative - as well as being useful in their own right...

I also agree that this one could use some more work -- unfortunately the author doesn't seem to be around. What would people think about moving this one to the Writing Workshop?


Mikey

I agree.

Editorial Note: This Conversation has been moved to the new 'Flea Market' Forum.

This is where we move any Peer Review, Writing Workshop or Alternative Writing Workshop Conversations where the original author has *not* posted to h2g2 for three months. This prevents the active Review Forums from clogging up with dormant entries, but in the Flea Market they can be picked up by others and polished off.

I'm running with this one now... over at A1105895 - OK!

The Apprentice

Just a thought - have you considered crediting the original author on the entry?

And Anna, please can we take this one out of the FM now the new version's been accepted into the EG?

Cheers,
Number Six