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Entry: Jaguar - a Car Manufacturer Born to Perform? - A87887092
Author: SashaQ - happysad - Editor - U9936370

Original Entry: Jaguar - Born to Perform? - A10114732
Original Author: Rains - Wondering where time's going and why it's in so much of a hurry! - U205100

I have already rescued Rains' Entry about Rover, so I decided to take on the Jaguar brand next...

Excellent work! I've just got a couple of comments to make, if I may?

I'm not sure the Juan Manuel Fangio, Moss & Hawthorn section is as clear as it can be as to who is driving for Jaguar and who for Mercedes Benz. I wasn't sure when you said they were driving alongside, do you mean they were both in the same team, or at the time of the accident they were driving neck-and-neck next to each other? Whose Mercedes-Benz drove into the crowd, and was a Jaguar alongside at the time of the accident?

I also think you should clarify that since 2008, when Tata finalised the purchase of both companies from Ford, Jaguar has been part of a company called Jaguar Land Rover.

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Do you agree?

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Thanks for reading, and sorry I missed your comments until now.

I agree the 1955 Le Mans section was not clear, so I've tweaked it and hope that is an improvement.

I have mentioned Jaguar Land Rover Ltd

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