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Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation Jul 18, 2014
Entry: Gandalf the Grey - Fictional Wizard - A763869
Author: Gnomon - Summer Time - U151503
I think this is ready now. I'm going on holidays for a week, so I probably won't respond to any comments until I get back. (My internet connection is rather dodgy where I am going.)
A763869 - Gandalf the Grey - Fictional Wizard
Bluebottle Posted Jul 18, 2014
More Lord of the Rings related articles are always needed, and this looks good to me. Couple of minor spelling things – 'Hobiit' is a little wrong, and I thought Palantir was really 'Palantír'?
You might also consider adding a link or two:
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I imagine you considered adding a section on who has played him on film and radio, such as Michael Horden and Ian McKellan?
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 18, 2014
Links added.
I'm undecided on adding references to the films.
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Bluebottle Posted Jul 18, 2014
Personally I don't think it needs it, but I do wonder whether other people would expect it...
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Aug 4, 2014
Hi Gnomon!
I'm a big fan of Gandalf, but I'm afraid there is much I once knew which I have forgotten already. There are a few things you should think about:
You say 'and was Olórin in the West long ago (presumably the land of Valinor)' but this is not only 'persumably', it is definitely his Maia name.
You should probably re-read the last paragraphs of the section about the Maiar at the start of the Silmarillion (Valaquenta). There it is even stated that he was the wisest of the Maiar. Unfortunately I only have the German version so it's better you read it yourself than me trying to translate it back to English.
There is also a section in the part about the rings of power and the 3rd age of Middleearth which talks about how the Istari came from the west. Here is stated for instance that all of the wizards could talk to animals (maybe that should be added to your list of magic Gandalf could do).
It seems Gandalf was the one who took the threat coming from Mirkwood most seriously and he even went to the tower of Dol Guldur himself and detected Sauron there.
You also do not mention Gandalf's horse or his sword (Glamdring, originally sword of the king of Gondolin and brother to Orcrist, sword of Thorin) at all.
'Although not an Elf, he was given the ring by its original guardian, Círdan the Shipwright, who never concerns himself with the affairs of Middle Earth and thinks that the ring will be better used by Gandalf'
I think what you say there is only half correct. Cirdan seemed to see Gandalf's importance and the hard times he would face and that's why he gave the ring to him and not anyone else. The unfinished Tales say that more directly. He also told Gandalf that he would wait for him to come back to the sea, which he does. The ship on which Gandalf and the other leave is in fact the VERY LAST, not just any ship.
According to the Unfinished Tales Gandalf was the last of the Istari to arrive, but he was the only one who fulfilled the assignment for which they were sent. The unfinished Tales even say that Olorin didn't really want to go to fight Suaron but had to be forced. He was even sent by Manwe himself (which in my opinion explains his connection to the eagles).
I think there is a very nice characterisation of Gandalf in 'The Istari' in the Unfinished Tales. Unfortunately I again only have the German version (I bought these books when I was a teenager). There is stated that only those who knew him could see the fire inside of him. He was friendly to everyone but told people off for foolishness. He was not proud and did not search for power.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 5, 2014
Thanks Tav. I'll look at these points when I'm back home with my books.
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Recumbentman Posted Aug 9, 2014
Interesting that he deals mainly in fire and smoke. Saruman deals in mirrors (the palantir is presented as a kind of focusable long-distance mirror. We all have one in our living room now.)
Smoke and mirrors; or as Bertie put it, smoke and daggers
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bertiespeak
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 12, 2014
Thanks, Tav, for your very detailed analysis of my entry. You've been such a help that I've added you to the entry as author. If you don't want this, let me know and I'll remove you again.
I'll deal with each of your points:
>>Olórin... is definitely his Maia name.
-- done.
>>at the start of the Silmarillion... it is even stated that he was the wisest of the Maiar
-- thanks for that. I'd forgotten that reference. I've put it in at the point where I talk about the skills of the different wizards.
>>all of the wizards could talk to animals
-- although it says this in the Silmarillion, the only example we have of Gandalf doing this is to eagles, who could speak the common tongue anyway. I now point this out.
>>he even went to the tower of Dol Guldur
-- I've added this.
>>You also do not mention Gandalf's horse or his sword (Glamdring, originally sword of the king of Gondolin and brother to Orcrist, sword of Thorin) at all.
-- how could I forget Gandalf's sword and horse? Added, to the Description section.
>>'Although not an Elf, he was given the ring by its original guardian, Círdan the Shipwright, who never concerns himself with the affairs of Middle Earth and thinks that the ring will be better used by Gandalf'
I think what you say there is only half correct
-- I don't think so, but I've reworded it slightly anyway. See if you are happy with it now.
>>the VERY LAST ship
I'm not going to mention the last ship, since I can't find any definite statement that it is the last ship, and there is also the legend that there was another ship after that, the one that Legolas built.
>>According to the Unfinished Tales Gandalf was the last of the Istari to arrive, but he was the only one who fulfilled the assignment for which they were sent. The unfinished Tales even say that Olorin didn't really want to go to fight Suaron but had to be forced. He was even sent by Manwe himself (which in my opinion explains his connection to the eagles).
-- there are few different versions of this in the unfinished tales, and they don't all agree. I'm not going to mention about Manwe, since Tolkien wasn't decided on it, but I've already said that he was the only wizard to succeed in his task.
>>I think there is a very nice characterisation of Gandalf in 'The Istari' in the Unfinished Tales... There is stated that only those who knew him could see the fire inside of him. He was friendly to everyone but told people off for foolishness. He was not proud and did not search for power.
-- I've already mentioned him being friendly but telling people off for foolishness, and I've mentioned that he appeared to glow slightly.
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Aug 13, 2014
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Peer Review: A763869 - Gandalf the Grey - Fictional Wizard
- 1: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 18, 2014)
- 2: Bluebottle (Jul 18, 2014)
- 3: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 18, 2014)
- 4: Gnomon - time to move on (Jul 18, 2014)
- 5: Bluebottle (Jul 18, 2014)
- 6: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (Aug 4, 2014)
- 7: Gnomon - time to move on (Aug 5, 2014)
- 8: Recumbentman (Aug 9, 2014)
- 9: Gnomon - time to move on (Aug 12, 2014)
- 10: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (Aug 13, 2014)
- 11: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Aug 25, 2014)
- 12: Gnomon - time to move on (Aug 25, 2014)
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