A Conversation for Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Peer Review: A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 1

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Entry: - A87823100
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - U1590784

I got lost in the archives this afternoon, while I was waiting for an email. I started with Cyrano, who mentioned the fact that somebody had met some aliens, and I couldn't resist.

Read, discard, whatever. I just thought I'd share.

DG


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Sorry about the title mixup.

DG


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 3

You can call me TC

A very very enjoyable read. Certainly whets one's appetite and brings up questions as to whether there weren't more of these sort of visitations. Would also possibly throw a new light on some of the stories in the Bible, etc smiley - canofworms


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 4

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

I fixed the subject title for you Dmitri. smiley - ok


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 5

You can call me TC

I hope that will bring more people in to comment now. BTW - I have no idea how the entry could be improved at all. The tone is fine with the little asides, and, of course, there are no typos.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks, you two! smiley - smiley


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 7

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

I love this story! Guys in togas and shiny shoes... maybe they needed them to get home?


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - rofl Magic shoes, I like that.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 9

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - applauseExcellent read, thank yousmiley - ok

You could link to A87816838 on "Albert K Bender" smiley - biro

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - diva


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 10

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks. smiley - ok I'll do that.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 11

minorvogonpoet

This is great.smiley - applause

I get the impression of Renaissance Milan as a kind of melting pot, where the beliefs of the Middle Ages, such as the existence of angels (and there isn't much difference between the description of smiley - angel and these visitors) mixed with the more rational approach of the modern age with its interest in science and technology. There must have been lots of new and eccentric ideas about. (Though Fazio is lucky the Church didn't start asking questions about his 'familiar spirit'smiley - erm)

smiley - biro In the sentence 'Fazio Cardano was a mathematician and a jurist' 'mathematician'has got misspelt.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 12

2legs - Hey, babe, take a walk on the wild side...

smiley - applause Brillient entry... and I knew who the author would be, before I'd clicked through smiley - tongueout

Weirdness was so much more delighfully about, in the 'days gone past' smiley - envysmiley - wah

Do we not have an entry on tin foil hats, to link to from the entry? smiley - weird (surely, we must* have an entry on tin foil hats?)
Was a good read, straight though, and kept my attention smiley - magicsmiley - goodlucksmiley - applause


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 13

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks, 2legs.

Alas, we do not have a tinfoil hat entry. I wrote one - er, Nigel wrote one - but it was only included in the EG on 1st April.smiley - winkeye

A serious *cough* entry would be welcome. We couldlend you the illustrated instructions on how to make one from smiley - thepost.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 14

Geggs

Interesting entry Dmitri.

Could a suggest a link to A19882263 on the mention of the Nigerian prince scam?


Geggs


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 15

2legs - Hey, babe, take a walk on the wild side...

*adds 'sensible entry on tin foil hats' to the list of entrys that's not been looked at in nearly two years* smiley - yikessmiley - doh Must must must, start riting again smiley - grovelsmiley - winkeye I got stuck on my novella about Beccles, which may end up like some kind of giant multi-faceted multiple-entry type thing, but I got stuck smiley - dohsmiley - grovel If only I had a deadline.... I could be really enjoying the wooshing noise it made, as it went past... smiley - winkeyesmiley - birosmiley - handcuffs I keep getitng dis-tractored from writing smiley - blushsmiley - zen


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 16

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Thanks, Geggs. Added! smiley - ok


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 17

You can call me TC

Talking of links and entries as yet not written, I am shocked to see that we don't have an entry on Leonardo da Vinci. Can't believe that Gnomon never wrote one. There are a quite few that come up if you search "Leonardo da Vinci" where he is obviously mentioned, but none connecting them all together.

In this entry, A1133407, the author expresses a suspicion as to where he got his ideas from. Implying aliens? smiley - aliensmilesmiley - alienfrown


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 18

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

I've written an Entry about Renaissance Art, there's also quite abit about Lenoardo Da Vinci in it, if I remember correctly.


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 19

SashaQ - happysad

I enjoyed this too smiley - biggrin

I did have a couple of queries...

The Greek style robes or togas sentence read oddly to me, as togas are Roman style robes.

Also the mention of the Prime Directive - is that what they called it, or is that you referencing Star Trek?

smiley - ok


A87823100 - Renaissance Aliens: Fazio Cardano's 1491 Close Encounter

Post 20

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - laugh Glad you liked it.

The source called the garements 'Greaak-style togas'.I put the word 'togas' in quotation marks to show that we, of course, know the Greeks didn't call their togas. I'm afraid we're stuck with the 15th Century's wrong-headed ideas about historical fashion.

And yeah, t he Prime Directive crack was me being snarky. Because what they described was exactly like the Prime Directive. smiley - winkeye


Key: Complain about this post

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more