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Bluebottle Started conversation Jul 2, 2013
Entry: Stuart Sutcliffe - A Fifth Beatle - A87800899
Author: Bluebottle - U43530
An article about 'The Lost Beatle'.
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Sho - employed again! Posted Jul 4, 2013
oh interesting stuff - no time now but I want to bookmark the convo so I am sure to come back later 
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 23, 2013
Yes - very interesting 
Just a couple of points I picked up on.
In the Could he play? section the sentence "He tried writing his own songs, and though John and Paul mocked these, both would later underestimate George's songwriting talent." isn't quite clear somehow.
In the Late 1960 section the sentence "John left Hamburg to return to England and perform with the Beatles back in Hamburg." also seems strange.
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Bluebottle Posted Jul 24, 2013
Thanks for the comments – I've reworded those 2 sections, so hopefully they make sense now.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 24, 2013
Excellent - I kind of knew what was meant by the paragraph including George, but that is much clearer now. Confusion with the other sentence cleared up too.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Jul 24, 2013
"that is much clearer now"
Rather that is very clear now
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 13, 2013
Hi <BB<
This is very comprehensive, well done.
There's 49 mentions of "the Beatles" and it should be The Beatles, according to the main article on them, which I believe is correct.
GB 
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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Aug 31, 2013
>>On 10 May 1860, as the Silver Beatles<<
1960... Paul is old enough without adding another 100 years! 
lil x
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Bluebottle Posted Aug 31, 2013
Old enough for what
?
When was the last time he was asked for ID, eh?
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Sep 11, 2013
Is this Entry finished?
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Bluebottle Posted Sep 11, 2013
I believe so - all suggestions have been acted upon.
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Florida Sailor All is well with the world Posted Sep 11, 2013
You still have the Silver Beatles auditioning in Scotland in the 19th century.
Just a minor point
F 
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Well done! 
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Peer Review: A87800899 - Stuart Sutcliffe - A Fifth Beatle
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- 2: Sho - employed again! (Jul 4, 2013)
- 3: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 23, 2013)
- 4: Bluebottle (Jul 24, 2013)
- 5: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 24, 2013)
- 6: SashaQ - happysad (Jul 24, 2013)
- 7: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Aug 13, 2013)
- 8: lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned (Aug 31, 2013)
- 9: Bluebottle (Aug 31, 2013)
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