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EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation Jul 10, 2014
A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
A few little curator changes required to tidy this up:
there were two proud, but separate traditions -- remove the comma
until after the print out had been returned
-- print out should be printout
Microsoft, released their version of BASIC -- remove the comma
for all the work they had put into BASIC for the Altair had resulted in income of two US dollars an hour
-- remove the word "for" from the start of this
Occasionally written to BBasiC
-- change "to" to "as"
put the final nail in the glory days of BASIC
-->
put the final nail in the coffin of the glory days of BASIC
object-orientated programming languages
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object-oriented programming languages
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Icy North Posted Jul 10, 2014
"put the final nail in the coffin of the glory days" is a bit of a clumsy metaphor, don't you think?
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 10, 2014
Yes. Any suggestions?
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Icy North Posted Jul 10, 2014
"put an end to the glory days" is better. As Basic didn't disappear completely, the coffin nail analogy is inappropriate.
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Icy North Posted Jul 10, 2014
I also have an aversion to writing BASIC in upper case. I know it's common, but the English language tends to assimilate these acronyms into proper nouns over time, and I see no reason we should treat it any different to Fortran (A87607597)
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jul 11, 2014
I have amended all Gnomon's suggestions but I don't know what to do about Icy's last comment. Is there anything else that requires changing in the Entry?
GB
EF: A645121 BASIC - the Programming Language
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 11, 2014
I don't think so. While I agree with Icy that BASIC looks very clumsy, it is the normal way of referring to the language, so it is not wrong.
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