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anhaga Started conversation Jun 5, 2014
A small note of a word needing removal:
In the second paragraph of "Loss and Remembrance", the "were" in this sentence is unnecessary:
"On the afternoon of 10 March, the thousands marched in full dress uniform, most in the famous red tunics, *were* led by riders on black chargers through the crowd-lined streets of Edmonton to assemble before Canada's Governor General, Prime Minister, Alberta's Lieutenant Governor and Premier and the families of the fallen officers for a celebration of their lives and of the community they had sworn to serve and protect."
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anhaga Posted Jun 5, 2014
Also, the locality of the killings is "Rochfort Bridge" not "Rockford Bridge".
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Icy North Posted Jun 5, 2014
Nice to see you around, Anhaga.
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jun 5, 2014
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Hi Anhaga, I concur with Icy, good to see you. Thanks for those corrections, now fixed
So sorry to hear the news of more Canadian police killings
All the best,
GB
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anhaga Posted Jun 5, 2014
Thanks for the condolences, Galaxy Babe. The killings in Moncton have been pretty disturbing to all of us here.
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