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EF: UPDATE Model United Nations

Post 1

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

Hello, first update I've done via this route, so apologies if I've got it wrong,

I have an update to Model United Nations " A86300778 " at my copy of it: " A85422639 "

It adds a paragraph on the primary differences between school and university debate.


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Post 2

SashaQ - happysad

Hi nbb

I'll have a look at this for you tomorrow smiley - ok


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Post 3

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

smiley - ok


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Post 4

SashaQ - happysad

Just a couple of questions about the new paragraphs:

What's the ICJ?

Two topics, two resolutions - is that instead of debating the resolutions and proposing amendments?

smiley - ok


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Post 5

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

Hi, the ICJ is the International Criminal Court of Justice - it is given above as a used committee, though it might be easier to remember if I added the acronym next to it when it first appears, or, if you think it better, I could just spell it out again in the footnote



Yes, it is, though amendments still exist, they are used to assist in the forming of a resolution, instead of purely fixing a ready made one

Is there anything in particular you would suggest that I add/change/remove to clarify that point (I didn't want to use the word amend)


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Post 6

SashaQ - happysad

Thanks nbb - I wrote out the ICJ in full, and now I've re-read the second item, I think it's clear enough as it follows from the Lobbying section smiley - ok

All done smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

Yay! smiley - ale


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