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shagbark Started conversation Jul 2, 2013
In the section Places and Landmarks at the end of the first paragraph find the words winkin, blinkin and Nod.
to this we may add:
They sit next to the Grand River. Meanwhile just a few blocks to the Northeast, a new landmark haas arisen just north of the railroadtracks on Washington Avenue. Built at a cost of one-hundred and eighty two US Dollars As mentioned in the June 26,2013 issue of the Lansing City Pulse the new Natural Gas power plant owned by the city Board of Water and Light has replaced the antiquated coal –fired plant on the river. The three smoke stacks which are a city landmark will never again spew pollution into the skies above Lansing.
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shagbark Posted Jul 2, 2013
I am not sure how long this link will be active but the city Pulse article http://www.lansingcitypulse.com/lansing/article-9007-the-good-the-bad-and-the-efficient.html goes into considerable detail.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 2, 2013
I've made those changes.
I also changed Capitol Region International Airport to "Capital".
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shagbark Posted Jul 2, 2013
If anyone would like to see them I have a couple photos I took a couple years ago of the old power plant.https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10200189396088952&set=a.10200189358208005.1073741825.1573280748&type=1&theater
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shagbark Posted Jul 2, 2013
cut and paste that https: address into the address bar and it brings up the photo.
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Jul 2, 2013
Hi shagbark, could you post the photo link with http:// instead of https:// and it will be a clickable link. Do you want the photo adding to your Entry? If so you can email the original direct to the h2g2 artists.
GB
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shagbark Posted Jul 3, 2013
I never tried to see if this will work
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10200189396088952&set=a.10200189358208005.1073741825.1573280748&type=1&theater
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shagbark Posted Jul 3, 2013
When I take a photo of the new one I might want that included, but no I do not want the old plant pictured in the article.
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