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Post 1

Recumbentman

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Please could I change the Kermit reference? I've done him a grave disservice.

Under the first header, 'Illusion?' could I replace the following paragraph-and a bit

According to Kermit the Frog rainbows are 'just an illusionThis quote comes from 'The Rainbow Connection', a song in The Muppet Movie.', but there is a lot more to a rainbow than there is to, say, a ghost.

For one thing,

with

As Kermit the Frog wisely sangThe Rainbow Connection, in The Muppet Movie.',
'Rainbows are visions but only illusions, and rainbows have nothing to hide'—
So we've been told and some choose to believe it; I know they're wrong, wait and see!
There is a lot more to a rainbow than there is to, say, a ghost. It is not illusory. Rainbows have much to reveal: an important truth.

To begin with,


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Post 2

Recumbentman

Please view the above in dna, Pliny is not reproducing my GUIDEML code.


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Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

Done.


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Post 4

Recumbentman

Thank you so much! smiley - cool


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