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Post 1

Baron Grim

Just a small issue. The diagram seems to be misplaced. It is referenced at the end of the second paragraph of the first section, but located at the end of the next section which ends on referencing the section that follows it. It's a bit confusing as the reference then seems to indicate the diagram is the instructions for the symbolic method rather than the "A String of Directions" section.


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Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

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EF: Dragon Curves - The Mathematics of Paperfolding A87760452

Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

It's not completely satisfactory, but I chose to put the diagram at that point. If it's at the point in the text where it should be, it's too close to the main picture of the entry. On a wide screen, the two pictures interfere with each other and look really peculiar. I chose to move it down a bit so that the two pictures would be separated.

If you any better suggestion, I'll consider it.


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Post 4

Baron Grim

In that case, stick it at the end of the article. That still qualifies as "below" but doesn't get confused with the reference to the following section as it does now. smiley - ok


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Post 5

Gnomon - time to move on

Done. Thanks.


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Post 6

Baron Grim

You're welcome.


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