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Post 1

AlexAshman


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In the first paragraph of the Treatment section, please could you change:

Many UJK soldiers were committed to asylums,
-->
Many British soldiers were committed to asylums,



Thanks smiley - ok


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Post 2

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - biro

donesmiley - ok


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Post 3

AlexAshman


smiley - cheers


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Post 4

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Um, not my poison, I'd prefer a smiley - smooch under the smiley - mistletoe

smiley - loveblush


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Post 5

AlexAshman


smiley - cake then? Or smiley - choc? smiley - ermsmiley - run


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Post 6

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ta

smiley - thiefsmiley - chocsmiley - run


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