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Rudest Elf Started conversation Oct 31, 2011
Entry ID: A285590 (Edited)
instinct1, but
high-impact forms
low-impact
I don't think swimming strokes, mid-sentence, need to be capitalised - there are several instances.
swim long distances,
The second of two links to the same short Entry. We have 'Cross Country Running' Entry ID: A1132417 (Edited) - there may be others.
two things: strokes
Often, certain pools
distance is considered
to further your development. ?
However, a newborn
2 There are still some 33 1/3 yard pools around, which can be used in small, local competitions but not larger ones. ?
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Nov 6, 2011
All done thanks
I also noticed: <> which didn't sound correct so I have changed it to:
<>
GB 
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Nov 6, 2011
"in towards the chest" would be better, I think.
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Rudest Elf Posted Nov 6, 2011
Well spotted - or should I say speckled? 
"in towards the chest" looks good to me, too.
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