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EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Rudest Elf Started conversation Aug 22, 2011
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For direct link try: http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/british/britain_wwone/edward_vii_01.shtml
For direct link try: http://www.royal.gov.uk/TheRoyalHousehold/Transport/TheRoyalTrain.aspx
<'like a comfy old pair of slippers'> 'Like a pair of comfy old slippers'
For direct link try: http://www.royal.gov.uk/TheRoyalResidences/WindsorCastle/WindsorCastle.aspx
Page not found. Try: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Klosters
<'Prince of the United Kingdom'> Linked page not found. Try: http://www.debretts.com/people/royal-family/the-line-of-succession.aspx
<- age 56 years -> Updating to 63?
<- age 57 years -> Updating to 64?
morning suit, and
Linked page not found. Try: http://www.princeofwales.gov.uk/personalprofiles/theprinceofwales/abouttheprince/theprinceofwalessfeathers/
the blessing
Linked page not found. Try: http://www.archbishopofcanterbury.org/pages/roles-and-priorities.html
Linked page not found. Try: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-13709883
egg-and-cress sandwiches
horse racing
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
<'like a comfy old pair of slippers'> 'Like a pair of comfy old slippers'
That's a direct quote from Camilla herself...so needn't be changed
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
The link you supplied to replace "Prince of the United Kingdom" says service unavailable so I've just removed the original dead link
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Aug 23, 2011
I'd agree about the Blessing - I read this last night and thought it would be so, as it is a part of the religious Wedding Service.
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Rudest Elf Posted Aug 23, 2011
Hi
1) <'like a comfy old pair of slippers'> 'Like a pair of comfy old slippers'
"That's a direct quote from Camilla herself...so needn't be changed"
I can't find the direct quote, but the headline on your link is "Like a pair of comfy old slippers" http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/uk_news/4420353.stm
2) "The link you supplied to replace "Prince of the United Kingdom" says service unavailable so I've just removed the original dead link"
The original link was to a Debrett's page - the one I suggested (which is still live http://www.debretts.com/people/royal-family/the-line-of-succession.aspx ) shows the line of succession, headed by Prince Charles - probably not worth keeping (the link).
3) the blessing
"I think my way is correct, it's an important part of the service"
That may be so, but none of the dictionaries agrees with you http://www.onelook.com/?w=+Blessing&ls=a
4) "I won't update their ages when they wed, that remains in stone"
Sorry, my bad!
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 31, 2011
If the issue here is whether it should be blessing or Blessing, I'd go along with Blessing. The Church of England Marriage Service gives titles to each of the sections, such as the Proclamation, the Marriage, the Blessing of the Marriage and so on. I think we should stick with these.
http://www.churchofengland.org/prayer-worship/worship/texts/pastoral/marriage/marriage.aspx
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 31, 2011
I've put the Debretts link on the phrase "Prince of the United Kingdom".
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 31, 2011
A Google search shows that both phrases "a pair of comfy old slippers" and "a comfy old pair of slippers" are commonly used, so I'll take GB's word for it that the way she is quoting Camilla directly.
EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
Rudest Elf Posted Aug 31, 2011
But the quotes (both within quotation marks) don't match.
You could keep the wording as is and remove the quotation marks from the Entry...
Of course, the BBC might have got it wrong.
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EF: The Love Affair of Prince Charles and Camilla Parker Bowles
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- 7: Lanzababy - Guide Editor (Aug 23, 2011)
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