h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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Only had a quick read through, but I'll be fine tooth combing it it over the coming days.

Watch this space

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Finally had a chance to give this a proper fine tooth.

Just a few thoughts...

Osteo-archaeologist Dr Jo Appleby of the University of Leicester thought the skeleton, intact except for its feet, was unlikely to be Richard III, but the evidence began adding up. was unlikely to be Richard III, but the evidence began adding up.

Can I change this to:

Osteo-archaeologist Dr Jo Appleby, of the University of Leicester thought the skeleton, which was intact except for its feet, was unlikely to be Richard III. The evidence, however, began adding up.

There was damage to the skull, consistent with a brutal death, and the striking curvature of the spine (scoliosis) convinced just about all of the remaining sceptics.

This one to this?

There was damage to the skull, consistent with a brutal death, and a striking curvature of the spine (scoliosis). Which convinced just about all of the remaining sceptics.

they wouldn't have had the technology to determine whom the bones belonged to

and can I change this to

they wouldn't have had the technology to determine to whom the bones belonged .

Just a few thoughts...

I'll have a looky around and see if there are any more Edited Entries we can link to as well

That's fine, thanks Mags

Changes made.

(I've still not built that Brio trainset )

Will have a another look for some linkys.

Sorry for the extended quiet, been re-reading the entry and looking for links.

Can't find any more links and there no more questions from me.

If you're happy with this in it's current state, then so am I.



Mags

thanks Mags