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Post 1

EliudGonzalezNunez

Entry: Quoted-In-Quotes - Blaine Taylor - A10493309
Author: EliudGonzalezNunez - U1698706

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If this don't speak for itself, me speaking for it would be kind'a pretentious.
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Post 2

U1250369

smiley - book


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Post 3

sprout

I like this a lot.

I don't know the context particularly but I like the style - a nice pithy sense of humour you have.

smiley - cheers

sprout


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Post 4

U1250369

I'm sorry, though I'm sure it's very good, not to my taste smiley - sorry


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Post 5

LL Waz

I like it too, a lot, and all the more so when read with the parallel one.

The style's smiley - cool, telling a story in point form, and the whole truth in fiction, fiction believed as a truth thing in the pair of entries is food for thought.

They're both very readable, the Fictionalized Quote one has particularly good timing.

Thanks for submitting them,
Waz


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Post 6

EliudGonzalezNunez

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1 ----- I appreciate all comments made here:


2 ----- ----- Chips-back-from-France's 1st-comment was enigmatic, somewhat terse, but very mysterious too.


3 ----- ----- Sprout's comment was flattering, stylishly-contextualized into a nicely hyphenated sentence.


4 ----- ----- Chips-back-from-France's 2nd-comment was very-self-revealing; it aint many got guts to say something they don't like might be good nevertheless.


5 ----- ----- LLLwaz's comment was very-flattering and very-perceptive. I aint claimin' to understand what LLLwaz's perceiving; I'm just sayin' the comment LLLwaz made is extremely perceptive. I've looked at it several times. Yup, it's perceptive.


6 ----- ----- All in all, taken in complete-context, I got'a admit I like what Chips-back-from-France said. Nothin' spurs you like a spur. Flattery just flattens you. Flat people tend to just lay there and sleep. Yup. Spurs is the thing. Chips-back-from-France's first comment was especially spurring. Fact, stirring's more the word I like for it here. Who was that actress broad that back in the teeny twenties stared at the camera for almost 1 solid non-stop minute of non-motion and wowed the audience with it? Yup. Silence. Very mysterious. Very stirring. Sticks the thoughts straight into the beholder's eyes

7 ----- ----- My own opinion of this piece is that it pretty-much sucks. So I guess I agree with Chips-back-from-France. It aint to my taste neither. It's kind'a fleabitten; which way's the flea market?

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Post 7

U1250369

smiley - laugh

Saucy


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Post 8

UnderGuide Editors

Congratulations EliudGonzalezNunez smiley - bubbly. You may have decided this sucks smiley - winkeye, but h2g2's UnderGuide miners thought different - I'm posting to let you know that this piece has been selected as an <./>underguide</.> entry.

An UnderGuide Gem Polisher has created a UG copy featuring on h2g2's Front Page one week. They've left a message on your home-space to consult on the very slight edits made.

Congrats again, and thank you for contributing here smiley - smiley. This is a fascinating entry.


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Post 9

U1250369

Well done EGN. True recognitionsmiley - smiley


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