A Conversation for The Only Café, Peterborough, Ontario, Canada
A315758 - The Only Cafe, Peterborough, Ontario, Canada
Beeblefish Started conversation May 3, 2001
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A315758
I've given this one a tweak or two .. what do y'all think?
~Beeblefish
A315758 - The Only Cafe, Peterborough, Ontario, Canada
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted May 4, 2001
I definitely would find this entry useful and interesting if I was in the area.
I do, however, think the prose could use some cleaning up. For example, the 3rd paragraph (i.e., the it's not the food or the coffee bit) is *way* too convoluted with all it's parentheses and footnotes.
Mikey
A315758 - The Only Cafe, Peterborough, Ontario, Canada
Dancer (put your advert here) Posted May 5, 2001
I must say that usually I don't go for those entries on local cofee shops and bars, but this entry is just lovely.
It shows that it's written with a lot of love.
And I don't mind the 5 round trips to the footnotes.
A315758 - The Only Cafe, Peterborough, Ontario, Canada
Beeblefish Posted May 7, 2001
Well, I think I like that paragraph the way it is, but thank you for the imput .. on some other advice I added a bit more color tot he article ..
~Beeblefish 
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Crescent Posted May 23, 2001
Congratualtions this Entry has been accepted into the Edited Guide Well done It now has to be sent to SubEd, who will give it a final polish, before it appears on the Front Page. This can take a while, so patience is needed, but it will make it Again, congratulations - THIS THREAD IS NOW CLOSED
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