h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

When all my writing skills fly out of the window and I'm as petrified as I was when I first clicked the button for the Eds to look at my first attempt at an Edited Entry.

It's amazing the amount of Stuff to Do I'm getting down while avoiding this sodding press release...

Oooh press releases are fun fun fun! If you're that stuck I could always put my rusty PR skills into action for ya

I have struggled through it! I'll post it on my blog so you can have a look, as long as you don't put red biro and 'SEE ME!' all over it.

http://diary-of-a-dog-walker.blogspot.com/2009/11/local-dog-walkers-dog-is-cover-star.html

That actually looks quite good hun! You beat yourself up too much

Looks good.

Possible typo on Tellington TTouch from Sarah Fisher's website. Double T's?

Also quite a few comma's in front of the word 'and' which isn't really great grammar, particularly when it happens lots. Quite a few you can probably just remove.

Hope that helps, good luck with it Mina!

for the Subbing! Can never sub my own stuff, I've tweaked it on the word document.

The quote from the website, I wasn't sure if it was 'good form' to correct it - The T in TTouch stands for 'Tellington' so it really doesn't need to be there, but didn't want to fiddle with someone else's content if it's supposed to be a quote.

Thanks fords! I always get the wobbles, a few more of these and I'm sure I'll be braver!

Cool, I wondered if that was the case on the double T - if its a quote then I guess it's down to them!

"Also quite a few comma's"

You might want to check your own punctuation first

:-p

That'll teach me to try to be helpful, hey - thanks for the welcome.

And you missed the full stop off of the end of that sentence.

I generally don't use full stops when I sign off with a smiley, too much effort

I never know where to put them - the is often part of the sentence, so the full stop should come after, but that looks .