h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

...but as I'm sure you know, there's always room for improvement. Consider using GuideML to spice it up a bit, this will give your entry a more professional look and allow you to drop the -dashes- you are using to emphasize words. The information contained in the entry seems solid enough, but its important to point out that anyone changing their lifestyle in this way should should consult their primary care doctor before beginning, in order to be safe. After all, you're trying to help people, right? You should also drop the first person references, as stated in the guidelines for writing a guide entry.

Actually, after i wrote that brief review, I discovered that another entry in the edited guide covers this subject adequately, and therefore I don't think this submission will be helpful to anywhere near the extent this other entry is. Good luck anyway.