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Alternative Writing Workshop: A6073986 - dunking biscuits

Post 1

Tom tamer of the lion

Entry: dunking biscuits - A6073986
Author: Tom/Thcur Vabri - U1874398

I need some help with this. What do you think


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Post 2

Tom tamer of the lion

no views on this then?


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Post 3

Tom tamer of the lion

no views at all


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Post 4

Cyzaki

I like the biscuity mush you get at the bottom of your tea when you've dunked for slightly too long smiley - biggrin

The best biscuits for dunking are bourbons smiley - smiley

smiley - panda


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Post 5

Skankyrich [?]

Great stuff!

There's a few spelling mistakes:

>any other results are found that are not included in the study the please - then please

>you know that they will do there jobs - their

>big mess in the bottom of the cup if it brakes - breaks (a few of these)

>this is because the biscuit is harder that the custard cream - than the custard cream

>Shortbread biscuits are nowhere near as strong as the Custard cream and the Bourbon, this is because it has a single layer, which is weaker, the Custard cream. - doesn't make sense; maybe 'which makes it weaker than the custard cream'?

>one two many dunks - too

>1-3 but you need to play it ear and see - play it by ear

>but it’s a little wired to taste ginger tea - weird

>Giving a intresting flavour to - interesting


This is a cracking read - off to make some smiley - tea now smiley - smiley


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Post 6

Tom tamer of the lion

done, thanks for the help. spell check is my worst enemy
any other feed back


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Post 7

Skankyrich [?]

No probs Tom - thanks for a cracking read smiley - ok


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Post 8

Tom tamer of the lion

its all right, do you recon this could go in the edited guide?, I wasn't sure?



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Post 9

Tom tamer of the lion

sorry I ment

smiley - cider


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Post 10

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This piece has been selected by the CAC Continuum for inclusion in the next edition of <./>ThePost</.> Yay! smiley - applause

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