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Largo_san Started conversation Aug 20, 2005
Entry: The Basics of Game Design - A5122955
Author: Largo_san - U1871830
my first ebtry and I wanted to see what people think
A5122955 - The Basics of Game Design
davidpk212 Posted Aug 30, 2005
The spelling is good, but you could do with changing those last two paragraphs. The guidelines state 'Avoid using the first person', you should obverse that well.
Other than that, the entry is good for a newcomer, and as a newcomer myself, who worse to say that! 
- davidpk212
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Nov 5, 2005
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