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Peer Review: A88016907 - The Bronte Family
SashaQ - happysad Started conversation Mar 13, 2021
Entry: The Bronte Family - A88016907
Author: SashaQ - happysad - U9936370
We have a gap in the Edited Guide that I am endeavouring to fill - more is needed on Charlotte, Emily and Anne in separate Entries, but I hope this brief summary of the Bronte family is helpful.
A88016907 - The Bronte Family
Bluebottle Posted Mar 15, 2021
I'll have a more thorough re-read later but can I mention a couple of first thoughts? Do we know when Patrick and Maria were born?
Also, in the Legacy section you may wish to link to A87794068 which is often known as the Bronte line and a good way to travel to the Bronte Parsonage if you wish to avoid using a car. (Very steep hill)
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Mar 16, 2021
Oh, nice. And you managed to mention Pontefract - the Prof will be pleased.
>>They learned French, German and Literature, plus Charlotte took on a role as English teacher, and Emily gave piano lessons to her fellow pupils.<<
That sentence is a bit confusing. Could you turn it into...?
'They learned French, German and Literature. Charlotte taught English and Emily gave piano lessons to her fellow pupils.'
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Mar 16, 2021
Oh, and PS: We have a photo from the Bronte house museum: A87896885 (Minorvogonpoet took this.)
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SashaQ - happysad Posted Mar 20, 2021
Thanks both
I updated that sentence and added mvp's photo
I added mention of the railway, and think I got it right - is the Entry A87794068 saying that there was a station at Keighley in 1847, but there wasn't a station at Haworth until 1867?
I added more detail about Patrick and Maria
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Bluebottle Posted Mar 26, 2023
I'll re-upload the other image tomorrow.
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Bluebottle Posted Mar 27, 2023
Added now: A88023927
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Peer Review: A88016907 - The Bronte Family
- 1: SashaQ - happysad (Mar 13, 2021)
- 2: Bluebottle (Mar 15, 2021)
- 3: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Mar 16, 2021)
- 4: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Mar 16, 2021)
- 5: SashaQ - happysad (Mar 20, 2021)
- 6: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Mar 20, 2021)
- 7: Bluebottle (Mar 22, 2021)
- 8: SashaQ - happysad (Mar 22, 2021)
- 9: SashaQ - happysad (Mar 26, 2023)
- 10: h2g2 auto-messages (Mar 26, 2023)
- 11: Bluebottle (Mar 26, 2023)
- 12: Bluebottle (Mar 27, 2023)
- 13: SashaQ - happysad (Mar 30, 2023)
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