A Conversation for Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
Peer Review: A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Started conversation Jan 24, 2019
Entry: Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States - A87928762
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - U1590784
Another missionary. This one started out in Africa, and headed to the US, where the real heathen were.
I found this amazing story and bring it to you, although I had to wade knee-deep through glurge to do it.
A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
SashaQ - happysad Posted Jan 25, 2019
Well done for getting through the glurge to tell us in an h2g2 way about a person who deserves to be commemorated in the Guide.
I spotted just a couple of bits that could do with a tweak:
"This happened to Kaboo, because he was a prince, he'd become a 'pawn', and his people couldn't come up with the ransom." - this sentence might need splitting into two.
The paragraph beginning "At this precise moment, Taylor University..." could be tightened up, I think - you mention the bank being about to foreclose twice, and in "partly because they didn't have enough food to feed them with." who are 'they'?
A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jan 25, 2019
Thanks for that good feedback, Sasha. Research took longer than I thought - and reading two books and a pamphlet besides watching one-and-a-half documentaries. By the time I was writing it up, it got late and I got sloppy. Thanks for showing me where I needed to go back and rewrite. 
I'll work on links later.
I hope it's better now. I want to do his story justice - a guy with that much joy and determination deserves to be a Hitchhiker.
A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
SashaQ - happysad Posted Jan 25, 2019
Spot on - thank you
" I want to do his story justice - a guy with that much joy and determination deserves to be a Hitchhiker. "
Yes indeed 
A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jan 25, 2019
I added a few internal links.
A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted Jan 26, 2019
An interesting story and very well told.
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SashaQ - happysad Posted May 25, 2019
Congratulations! 
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Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor Posted May 26, 2019
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Peer Review: A87928762 - Prince Kaboo, Missionary: Samuel Morris, from Liberia to the United States
- 1: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jan 24, 2019)
- 2: SashaQ - happysad (Jan 25, 2019)
- 3: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jan 25, 2019)
- 4: SashaQ - happysad (Jan 25, 2019)
- 5: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jan 25, 2019)
- 6: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (Jan 26, 2019)
- 7: h2g2 auto-messages (May 24, 2019)
- 8: SashaQ - happysad (May 25, 2019)
- 9: Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor (May 26, 2019)
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