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Post 1

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

Entry: Discus - A87727017
Author: Nosebagbadger {Ace} - U14077177

Another one of my Olympic field event project.
I wouldn't suggest reading this immediatly after the shot put one - the layout is very similar,
Corrections, ideas etc wanted please


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Post 2

Nosebagbadger {Ace}

i've added some stuff at the end to reduce its dry nature


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Post 3

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Can you give me a nudge to come back to this one nbb? Shout loudly as in 'Oi, you're forgotten this one.'

I am all out of brain cells for today. smiley - online2long


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Post 4

AlexAshman


There's the odd sentence that isn't quite right, so I'd advise a quick proof read. Also, perhaps "The Discus Throw" would make the title clearer. smiley - erm


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Post 5

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Hi Tufty smiley - smiley

This Entry is in Peer Review now, and we were also talking about what the title should be. smiley - ok


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Post 6

AlexAshman


smiley - doh It's been a while, and I didn't notice the EGWW: bit in the thread title.


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Post 7

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

It's lovely to see you again tufty, I hope all is well with you? take care and have a happy Christmas smiley - hug


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