A Conversation for the Seasonal Savings Carol 2011
Alternative Writing Workshop: A87726342 - Seasonal Savings- a Poem
shagbark Started conversation Dec 4, 2011
Entry: Seasonal Savings- a Poem - A87726342
Author: shagbark - U170775
A light-hearted song for shop owners at Christmas.
A87726342 - Seasonal Savings- a Poem
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Dec 4, 2011
That's a hoot.
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Sol Posted Dec 4, 2011
Oh superb! I can see I am going to have to learn it by heart and sing it to myself whenever asaulted by Xmas music and the like.
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Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Dec 4, 2011
This is tremendous fun Shagbark!
You have made me smile! 
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minorvogonpoet Posted Dec 4, 2011
Thanks for this shagbark. It definitely calls out to be sung.
Just one thing - I think it should be 'prices that set' in the third line.
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shagbark Posted Dec 4, 2011
prices that set folks raving?
I think I will leave that line the way I wrote it.
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aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Dec 4, 2011
MVP means that you have a plural noun and a singular verb, which is not grammatically correct. 
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minorvogonpoet Posted Dec 4, 2011
Yes, that is what I meant. Sorry if it was unclear.
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