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UnderGuide Gem Polisher Calling....
Trin Tragula Started conversation Jun 28, 2007
Hello there! I've just finished polishing your 'Neverno' for the UnderGuide and the UG version is here:
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As you'll see, I've not really interfered with the text, though it's a bit more spaced out now.
The two main changes are the title - where I've removed 'a fictional tale [probably]' - and the note at the end - which I've removed completely.
Just because I don't think you need either of them and they end up getting in the way. We remove a lot of 'a short story'-type subtitles when things go into the UG - because readers will know this already - but the note similarly... it just seemed a bit too heavy-handed, if you know what I mean? Good stories can be left to speak for themselves and this one should be, I think.
However - this is the UnderGuide and you're the boss. So if there's anything you'd like putting back or altering further, please shout out
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cupati Posted Jun 28, 2007
I know, I don't know why I put the note in in the first place. And yes, the fictional tale [probably] was purely advertising.
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cupati Posted Jun 28, 2007
Squee! *bouncebouncebounce* Squee!
Thankyou!
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