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A88017528 The Paris Moustache Strike of 1907
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Done!

The only question I have is are you able to explain the comment 'like the elephant song' for a ?


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I think they mean like the trumpeting of the elephant. It does say 'song', though.

also, 'une véritable barbe' is literally 'a real beard', so it's a pune, as Terry Pratchett says.

Maybe add a footnote to the end of the sentence and say, 'Literally, a real beard.' Let the reader figure the rest out, or shrug and say, 'French.'

I added that, and also added an accent on 'cafe' just to create some French ambience. Would you like to have a thorough read-through and let me know your thoughts?

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C'est magnifique!