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Post 1

sooka5

Entry: The art of film and its slow decline - A3984221
Author: sooka5 - U1530923

a passage about film and its current state.


A3984221 - The art of film and its slow decline

Post 2

Phoenician Trader

A nice piece of editorialising. Can you add some paragraph breaks to make it easier to read?

It might be worth mentioning that the 60's produced vast quantities of rubbish films that died a quick and unlamented death. A few of real quality have come to us. Also some of the stuff coming out of Europe is breathtaking.

I admit adding too many diverse facts may destroy the essence of your message.

I will be interested to see what others think.

smiley - lighthouse


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Post 3

FordsTowel

Sooka, It is suggested that PR submissions be as ready to publish as the author can make them.

Please do a spell check, especially on the entries important words like Actor.

smiley - towel


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Post 4

U168592

Again 5 weeks and nothing from the author, back to Entry/Flea Market?
Froodsmiley - wizard


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Post 5

GreyDesk

It's presented as a personal opinion piece. Therefore if it remains abandoned it should go back to entry...



Just not right now, that's all smiley - winkeye


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Post 6

sooka5

did you need anything else changed? what do i need to do to get this into the edited guide? sorry i havnt been on in a while


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