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Entry: The Importance Of Marshmellows - A3974187
Author: NeverNormal - U1382074

The entry I wrote is, what I think is an original one, atleast I hope it is. I first thought it was finished but it only took me a minute to write so there has to be more to add to it than just havng a couple of lines. If anyone could help me out as to what to write then that would be well, very helpful.

Welcome to H2g2 and the writing workshop. This review forum is for entries that hope to go through PeerReview but need a bit of extra help before that. So it's for entries that adhere to the <./>Writing_guidelines</.>. Whilst this wouldn't be a good entry for putting into PeerReview because it doesn't follow the guidelines we do have another review forum where it might eventually go, the Writing-Alternative. This is a review forum for fiction, opinion, satire and any other good writing that just happens not to fulfill the guidelines.

If you want to work at this then things to consider might be:

What is it about marshmallows that make you happy?
The sugar? The way they melt in the mouth? The fluffy rubberiness at the start? The way they float in hot chocolate? Playing games with them?

Take some time to have a look at the review forums and some of the entries there are, and see what you might want to do with this.

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Kat

There isn't really anything about marshmellows that is amusing - it's more like when you think about it, it makes you happy or entertains you. I find this because you're thinking about something silly. Why would you think of marshmellows? (It's also something I was told by one of my friends which turned out to be true.)

I guess I may be able to add why they entertain you or that how it doesn't work for some people. Maybe something like that? I'll keep thinking... eventually I'll find something but I still appreciate suggestions.

If marshmellows are that important, it is worth learning how to spell the word.

Are you still around, NeverNormal? Are you interested in making this into an interesting and amusing entry on marshmallows? I can offer advice, if you are.

I don't even like marshmallows and I could write about the wonderfulness of them Maybe the author's run away though...

I'd love advice. Just wish I responded quicker to your reply. I didn't run away, I just forgot my password and guessed it so many times that it wouldn't let me try again... Well I finally remembered my password so I'm back and like I said I'd love advice for the entry I want to write about marshmallows. (Please excuse my writing if it has poor grammar, spelling, etc.) And yes, I would like it to be amsuing and entertaining... I guess I'd like to make it a bit humourous if at all possible. Thanks to anyone that tries to help me out with this.

NeverNormal

"Don't panic and think of marshmellows"

Didn't work for the ghostbusters

Hey that's actually true! It didn't work for the ghostbusters. Never thought of that.

Author has elvised - back to entry?

seconded