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Peer Review: A3911744 - Girls Aloud

Post 1

iamanumpty

Entry: Girls Aloud - A3911744
Author: iamanumpty - U1501243

Surely the Girls deserve an entry?


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Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

Is there anything else you can say about the band?

Do they write their own songs or perform other people's work? Do they sing, play instruments, dance? Have they released an album? Any number 1's? What style of music do they sing?


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Post 3

Kat - From H2G2

Take a quick look at A53209-Writing For The Edited Guide and then take a look at these other entries about bands...

A737633-Blur
A680861-Rammstein
A578982-Oasis

Or in fact anything listed in C495

Hopefully they should give you an idea of the sort of thing that needs to be included. Read The Writing For The Edited Guide one particularly though, it'll be really useful.

Kat


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Post 4

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

Cheryl Tweedy (spelling)

(Also didn't Cheryl Tweedy get into some sort of trouble - abrawl or s'thing?


This Entry could do with a little more of your "encyclopaedic knowledge of pop trivia".

smiley - biggrin



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Post 5

Mina

Isn't this band one of the winners of a tv programme to create a band? I don't think I've ever heard one of their songs, but the name rings a bell.

Shouldn't be aloud perhaps?


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Post 6

Cyzaki

One-stop researcher?

smiley - panda


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Post 7

GreyDesk

You could well be right about that.

Back to entry with it.


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Post 8

Cyzaki

Can you tell I want my badge back? smiley - tongueout

smiley - panda


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Post 9

GreyDesk

You didn't resign, you only went on a break.

And as far as the Yahoo database is concerned, you're still a Scout. Your name and e-mail address are in the membership directory, and you've still got a slot for making your picks in the diary.

That in my view makes you a Scout in all but badge. Therefore I'm including your name as the proposer of the various moves that are being suggested smiley - ok


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Post 10

Cyzaki

Ooooh, coolness!

smiley - panda


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Post 11

Smij - Formerly Jimster

You you really want your badge back? It's here if you do smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Cyzaki

Yes please! smiley - biggrin

smiley - panda


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Post 13

GreyDesk

*Bang*

And Cyzaki takes Jimster up on his offer so fast that she bites his hand off all the way up to his ankles smiley - laugh


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Post 14

Cyzaki

smiley - laugh

smiley - panda


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Post 15

DJR

i can't help thinking that you're not really reviewing the piece... which could do with a lot more wordage and some links to their official site / BBC News article about Tweedy's brawl etc.etc.


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Post 16

Kat - From H2G2

Nicely nicely...the reason they aren't reviewing the piece is that the author appears to have jumped ship and so isn't around to use our suggestions. Plus we're moving it out of PR so there's not much point anymore.


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