h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Chavs/Townies/Neds/Scallies/Boy Racers - A3096641
Author: Nickorath - U950711

I have read this article and i think it is good although it needs one or two things added.

Information like social habits (smoking outside Mcdonalds) and intelligence could be added and a more specific title could be chosen.

good entry

Maybe abit about the female equivilent. Those girls with the peroxide hair and the big hoopy earrings. There often seen with too much make up, low cut trousers (to show off their thongs) and a pram.

Dan

Some typos:

The tend to represent -> They ...
usualy -> usually
jewlrey -> Jewelry

Dan

It's a flaw in h2g2 that you can submit someone else's work to the Writing Workshop or to Peer Review when they're still around. This is Nickorath's entry. If he wants to work on it, it is really up to him. Twerpy, before you submit Nickorath's work, I suggest you contact him and see does he want to complete this himself, or is he willing to let you adopt it.

There are a lot of typos which will have be corrected (for example, corsa's should be corsas). But that's trivial. More importantly, it needs a better title, some more content and some structure - a few headers would organise things.