h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Tucson - A2991558
Author: MrToastmaster - U194782

This was meant to be a very brief not detailed overview of Tucson. Entire books have been written about the city, but I just wanted to make it useful for someone visiting.

Tucson, great!
... down and down I ago
into the ground where the bad seeds are sown
Calexico! I love it. I be right with you. First I got to read your article. Tucson here I come, Mrs. Leslie Marmon Silko get your kecks on.

Hey..

I'm always pleased to see someone contribute to PR who hasn't got an entry in the EG already.

I can see why you want to keep things brief, but IMHO this is a little too brief.

So far so good. I agree with Z, though. It's too brief. Perhaps you could elaborate on famous people from Tucson, or some juicy anecdotes from the past would help to liven up your story. Bankrobbers, outlaws, wars, bootlegging?
I suggest you add some noise, smell and movement. We want food, drink, music and dance. What do ordinary people do on a Saturday night for instance.
What about the Mexicans, the different people of Indian descent, the smuggling, the crime, the real-estate business is it booming or on its ass at the moment. Employment, economy, industries, etc.

Maybe that explains why Jojo left for some Californian grass.

A little brief, I agree.

HELL

There's currently an entry about Tucson in the Flea Market if you'd like to take it on and improve it MrToastmaster - A858008

You could merge the two, maybe add a bit more, and come up with something pretty good The Flea Market front page <./>RF4</.> will tell you what you need to know about how to do that.


Scout

Still working on this one?

Recommend move back to entry on grounds that the author has Elvised

Agreed and added to the list