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Jimi X Started conversation Jun 9, 2004
Entry: The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania - A2656956
Author: Jimi X - U53353
An entry about the covered bridges in Bucks County, Pennsylvania.
Covered bridges are a major tourist draw for some parts of the state, especially at their most 'scenic' during the autumn.
Cheers!
- Jimi X
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Z Posted Jun 10, 2004
Good entry Jimi.
This may be totally irrelevent but it did leave me wanting to know more about covered bridges, as in why they were first built and when - I did also wonder what they were convered with.
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Jun 10, 2004
I mentioned that the first covered bridges were built in Europe in the middle ages in the first sentence.
I can add a bit more that they were built of wooden timbers and the 'covering' is essentially a roof to protect the exposed timbers from the elements, extending the life of the bridge's materials.
Thanks for reading!
- Jimi X
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jun 10, 2004
Hey Jimi Another nice one with a few things to sort out
Footnotes should be before the full stop (or any other puctuation), not after it.
"Covered bridges were so popular in the eastern USA because of the sheer abundance of timber. However, with a bridge's trusses and supports made entirely of wood, weather damage would be a serious problem. Thus the simple solution of adding a roof covering over the bridge."
I'm a little perplexed by that paragraph. Firstly, I don't think you need 'so' in that sentence if you also have 'because'. I can see how it would work in speech, but it doesn't seem quite right on the page. Maybe 'particularly popular' would look better? A Sub-ed would prolly know more about this than me.
Secondly, it says that covered bridges were popular because of the timber abundance, but it also says that the bridges were covered to protect from weather damamge. The 'however' in the middle of the para negates the first sentence. Perhaps what you meant to say was that the roof helped to protect the timbers *and* there were a lot of covered bridges because there was a lot of timber
But if the roof is also made of wood, doesn't that just mean more timber to rot?
"more than 200 operating covered bridges"
When was the last one built? Might it be be better to say 'remaining' if they're not being built any more?
That whole paragraph could easily be one sentence instead of three I think.
"in a three-hour driving"
'in a three hour drive'?
Does the Bucks County Conference and Visitors Bureau have a website? Ah, they do http://www.buckscountycvb.org/
"At 82 feet in length, it is just downstream from Loux Bridge"
That suggests to me some dependence on being 82 feet long *because* it's downstream from Loux Bridge, as in f'rinstance, 'at 1,000 feet long, the bridge is the longest of its type in the world'. Do you see what I mean?
Are the bridges painted? If so it would be a nice addition to the description of each one.
Scout
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 6, 2004
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Jul 7, 2004
What, you wanted action on that quickly?!?
My Internet connection has been a bit dodgy lately and I'm off on a second honeymoon tomorrow...
I *promise* that I'll address all your concerns in another week or two. I've started working on them already, it's just a matter of going back in my files to find the rest of the information you're seeking.
- Jimi X
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 7, 2004
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Demon Drawer Posted Jul 16, 2004
My name is Demon Drawer, not a lot of people know that.
Great entry by the way Jimi. In case you haven't noticed my to do list has expanded again.
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Aug 26, 2004
> I *promise* that I'll address all your concerns in another week or two.
Has this had a chance to have happened yet?
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Sep 8, 2004
And one week after Mikey asks for it, it is finished.
Sorry for the *huge* delay in working on this one.
Life, don't talk to me about life.
I think I've made all the fixes that were requested. If I missed anything do give me a shout and I promise to get to it in a reasonable time period. Honest!
- Jimi X
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Milos Posted Sep 8, 2004
Does that mean before or after Halloween?
First footnote is still after the full stop for that sentence.
a three-hour driving >> a three-hour driving tour, perhaps?
Some things you could include if you want (or not, actually I'm just personally curious).
How do the bridges handle the larger cars? They wouldn't have been built wide enough to allow two full traffic lanes, would they? Or are they all one-lane bridges?
How are the bridges maintained? I expect they're painted regularly, and the roofs timbers replaced as needed? Are the driving surfaces specially treated or replaced occasionally?
This makes me wish we had more than four of these bridges in Missouri.
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Sep 9, 2004
Fixed the first footnote, added a footnote about current vehicle limitations and added 'tour' back into the description of the tour.
Just to satisfy your curiosity, they're maintained very much like any other bridge or roadway. Some have asphalt running through them and others simply allow you to drive on the wood.
Some of the bridges can look a bit ratty before re-painting and I didn't figure it would be fair to say 'So and so bridge needed a fresh coat of paint at the time of writing'. Besides, my lovely bride says that the peeling paint adds to their charm...
Hope that covers all.
- X
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Fathom Posted Sep 9, 2004
Very interesting entry.
Not to be picky but I've found a typo: in the paragraph on Sheard's Mill Bridge you have 'while' instead of 'white'.
Is it worth adding a tiny reference to the obvious film? Many people will have seen it and may have become interested in the subject as a result.
F
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Sep 10, 2004
I reckon I'll fix that typo by X-mas...
Actually, it's already done.
I've never seen the film (Bridges of Madison County right?) so I can't offer much about that other than the fact that I stole the form of the title of the film for the title of the entry...
- Jimi X
A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Fathom Posted Sep 10, 2004
It's a nice film. It would be interesting to know where it was filmed; I imagine if one of 'your' bridges was featured you would already know. I'd search for it but I've got limited internet access from here.
This is a good entry (IMHO) and I'm sure a lot of people will find it interesting. These bridges are very photogenic so any additional details suggesting which bridges are particularly picturesque might be of value to any photographers reading it.
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A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
Jimi X Posted Sep 10, 2004
The Bridges of Madison County" was made on location in Madison County, Iowa. http://www.madisoncounty.com/movie.html
Each one has its own personality and any could make a nice photo, depending on the season or lighting... I reckon I'll leave that bit out.
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Peer Review: A2656956 - The Covered Bridges of Bucks County, Pennsylvania
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- 3: Jimi X (Jun 10, 2004)
- 4: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jun 10, 2004)
- 5: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 6, 2004)
- 6: Jimi X (Jul 7, 2004)
- 7: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 7, 2004)
- 8: Demon Drawer (Jul 7, 2004)
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- 12: Jimi X (Sep 8, 2004)
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