A Conversation for taming the Aphex Twin
A2640340 - taming the Aphex Twin
lepoulet Posted Jul 8, 2004
To be an H2G2 entry, this piece really needs to break away from being persuasive literature toward being analytical and expository. Try adding sections on the artists' background, history, albums, etc. And for Bob's sake, capitalize the title; no one ever gets put in for bad grammar. Also, please start the article by telling us that you're talking about an underground musical artist who calls himself Aphex Twin.
A2640340 - taming the Aphex Twin
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Aug 26, 2004
A2640340 - taming the Aphex Twin
Dr Hell Posted Aug 26, 2004
Author is out for lunch.
I suggest a move to the Entry. In the case the author returns he could still work on it and resubmit it to PR.
HELL
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Aug 26, 2004
Seconded: it's more suited to collective, anyhow.
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GreyDesk Posted Aug 26, 2004
OK, I'll add this move to the list that I'm collating.
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