A Conversation for Penny Mellor

Writing Workshop: A2072080 - Penny Mellor

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leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

Entry: Penny Mellor - A2072080
Author: leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator] - U534308

more added re Penny Mellor/ msbp


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Geggs

Don't know where to start on this.

Firstly, the way this entry is presented comes across as a hachet job. I get the impression that you don't like Penny Mellor and are trying to discredit her. If that is not the case then I apologise, but it does look like it's a personal attack.

Secondly, following the overturn of another 'cot-death' trial last week, there was some discussion in the media over whether MSBP actually exists or not. Some arguing that it is an unproven theory, other saying that certain person have admitted acting out MSBP towards their children.

So, the entry I would actually like to see is a balanced reckoning on MSBP which shows all (or just some if there's too many) of the arguements for and against MSBP. Clearly, it would be impossible to come to a decision at the end of it, because no decision has yet been made.

Would you be able to do *that* entry? Or do you think the honour should go to someone else?


Geggs


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leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

the trial evidence doesn't cast any light on the entity of MSBP. it casts doubt on the diagnosis in certain situations


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leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

the main thrust of this article is penny mellor's persecution of david southall - the roy meadows issue is now mentioned in a bit more detail. my entry was prompted by a conversation with someone falsely accused of MSBP who can't stand penny mellor ( and there are several others)


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leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

can someone tell me what is wrong with this article? I have made changes but without knowing what the problem is how can I get anywhere?


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