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Trin Tragula Started conversation Oct 22, 2007
Hello there! Just popping by with the UG version of 'Style Guru':
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I haven't actually made any changes (apart from indenting it, which I tend to think makes poems look a bit better on hootoo pages).
I did wonder about 'rock' in that last stanza though. Not being a style guru myself, maybe I'm missing something... but should there be a comma after 'place mats' perhaps?
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spiderbaby Posted Oct 29, 2007
Thanks. Forgotten how to edit!
Can see couple of things.
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Trin Tragula Posted Nov 6, 2007
Well, if you tell me what they are, I can make the changes to the UG version 
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