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Entry: 'Star Trek' – Klingon Weapons, Honour, Pain and Sex - A55322426
Author: Galaxy Babe - U128652

Qa'Pla!
This began as Klingon weapons by h5ringer and I have added the rest, not sure if mixing weapons and sex is a good idea for an entry but that's Klingons for you...

GB

Are you doing a University project, or why the sudden influx of Star Trek entries?

Ewww - weird or what! I mean the Klingons, not the article.

I can't criticise the text due to lack of knowledge of the subject, but it reads fine, and leads me through to the end, and my eyes did get bigger the more of it I read.

I only spotted one minor query:

>>>vital organs duplicated — each organ has a *redundant* backup.


I'm not sure that {redundant} is the best word here, perhaps *dormant* would be better?

and one teeny typo

you describe one of the daggers as {viscous} when I'm sure you mean {viscious} - (damn spell checker probably).




do I have to say 'Live Long and Prosper' now?

No, redundant is quite the right word - that's what redundancy means in technical terms, having one or more duplicates that will take over if one fails.

Well I've learned something new, thanks Mala.

Thanks ladies, I'll tweak

No, this isn't a Uni project, this is the last (for a while) Trek entry.

It's just a teeny collaboration between two Trekkies who are trying something different

is a good motto

a better motto than "it is a good day to die" fer certain


(nice work )

anyone got a ciggie?

Noth€r

I have rearranged this somewhat, and added a bit more info

I could add more about the Klingon personality, if required

We have an entry about the Klingon Bird-of-Prey coming up, for those interested

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cheers!

onto the next then

Well done! You may indeed by converting me!

Congratulations!

...Do you think that Klingons have developed pain patches? For those who are trying to quit pain sticks?

(personally, i think they ought to try pooh sticks - it's much more relaxing)

'It's a good day to die'

Do you think that Klingons have developed pain patches? For those who are trying to quit pain sticks?