h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi,

you've chosen an interesting topic; it makes me want to go on holiday.

I've really liked your introduction, which is very informative, although I'd add a picture or a detailed description of the scenery. This would make the article more vivid.

The main part is also quite interesting, now I know what to bring along for my next holiday in Italy. However, the linking between the paragraphes could still be improved. As it is now, it's a bit too much "point-for-point" for my liking. Still, this makes it very informative and clear.

I've also enjoyed the informal and chatty style and that you directly address the reader - I don't know about the respective rules or customs on H2G2, but it works very well with the given topic.

To sum it up, I can only say that I've liked your article, though there is still some room for improvement (especially regarding the linking of paragraphs and sentences)