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Post 1

TanisNikana

Entry: Xenocard - A1061083
Author: TanisNikana - U227802

And another of mine from Everything2.


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Post 2

Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent)

Hi TanisNikana,

Your entry (entries) seem to have got overlooked smiley - sadface

I have just one comment: I don't know what a lot of the abbreviations mean. Like RPG, HP. You could write them out in full the first time they occur or use a foot note.

Awu.


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Post 3

TanisNikana

Very well. I am used to the idea of linking to the definitions of the words, but I can explain them for the Guide.


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Post 4

Cyzaki

Are you still working on this? If you are I'll post some comments smiley - smiley

smiley - panda


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Post 5

TanisNikana

Could you, please?


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Post 6

Cyzaki

Will do after I've had my tea!

smiley - panda


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Post 7

Cyzaki

Okay. It looks like a good entry, but reading through it there are a few things that I noticed:

You need to say something about what Xenosaga: Episode One is, as I, for one, had never heard of it. Is it a Playstation game? A PC game?

What's a CGC?

It's quite difficult to read at the moment, especially the last section - are you confident to put it into GuideML (we can help you!) to make it easier to read?

smiley - panda


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Post 8

TanisNikana

Wow! If Xenosaga isn't entered in here, I guess I'll have to do that too.


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Post 9

Cyzaki

Good idea, but you should still add a sentence or two about it in this entry, just so people know what you're talking about.

smiley - panda


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Post 10

Cyzaki

Are you still working on this?

smiley - panda


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Post 11

Cyzaki

Can you remove the first person references please?

smiley - panda


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Post 12

Cyzaki

Back to entry? Tanis has gone awol.

smiley - panda


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Post 13

Cyzaki

smiley - whistle

smiley - panda


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Post 14

GreyDesk

seconded smiley - ok


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Post 15

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Thirded!

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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