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Peer Review: A46474509 - Dwarf fortress, the game.
manored Started conversation Jan 26, 2009
Entry: Dwarf fortress, the game. - A46474509
Author: manored - U13796843
This is my most polished entry about the game "dwarf fortress" (there are 2) wich, I believe, meets all the requirements to enter the edited guide, althought I am not sure. The use of examples instead of what kind of features it has instead of the features thenselves sounds shallow, but the game is one of those that is better learnt on playing than reading manuals
As an important note the game is in active developement, so this entry may need updating rather soon, and a constant amount.
A46474509 - Dwarf fortress, the game.
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jan 26, 2009
Hmmm - it reads rather like an advertisement to me...
Especially since it's not even in Beta yet - it looks like you're just trying to find people to test it for you
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manored Posted Jan 27, 2009
Its not my creation, but of Toady the Great, and I think he doesnt evens knows about this entry
And althought it is Alpha it has a legion of fans, so advertisement isnt really necessary.
Thought it does sounds like advertisement, but the guide has to bring information about everthing, and information about certain things will sound like advertisement
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Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jan 27, 2009
Ah. The fact that your friend made it doesn't make it less of an ad.
I can't write about my comics and claim they're the best ever with "legions of fans" just because I want them to be read...
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manored Posted Jan 27, 2009
Toady is not my friend either, im just a fan of his work. I think you didnt understood: it IS and Ad, because the guide is meant to bring information about everthing, and games are part of everthing, it will have to bring information about games, and information about games is advertisement to then.
Oh, but DF does have legions of fans. if you dont believe search for it on google and read the reviews
And write about your comics, they are part of everthing. If they suck people will take care of adding that detail for you
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Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jan 27, 2009
A game that's not out of alpha isn't established enough to warrant its own edited guide entry, plain and simple.
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manored Posted Jan 27, 2009
Alpha games are included in "everthing".
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Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jan 27, 2009
I'm not going to argue with you. It's an advertisement and nothing more, so it won't make it into the Edited Guide.
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manored Posted Jan 27, 2009
Well if you know a manner of writing about games winhout advertising then in the process, share it with me and I will be glad to write another entry that sounds less like an Ad.
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minichessemouse - Ahoy there me barnacle! Posted Jan 27, 2009
hi you might find it helpful to read some other games and computer entries, many can be found here. C800 have a read through a few and see if you can alter your article to a similar style to the ones already in the guide, you might be worth waiting until the game is a little further on in its develpopment before writing anything concrete about it as you dont want to have to keep updating it!
Goodluck getting it sorted.
mini
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manored Posted Jan 30, 2009
Thanks, handt thought on that will give a look.
Game developement isnt really fast enough to require many updates, and at the moment the developer is focusing in some utopic goals in areas of the game other than I mentioned, so it will take a while until it really needs a update
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Dogster Posted Jan 31, 2009
Actually I agree with the OP that the fact that it's not out of alpha is not a serious problem for writing a guide entry about it. It really does have a genuinely enormous fan base and the game is very playable (if absurdly difficult) as it is. Gmail still claims it is "beta" so you have to take these labels with a pinch of salt.
OTOH this entry would need a lot of work to make it suitable for the guide.
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manored Posted Jan 31, 2009
I agree that it needs a lot of work, it is just that writing everthing about DF, even a rough everthing, is an epic task, especially because there are large undocumented areas of the game, so I think its quite hard and inviable to make an entry as it would be ideal to a guide like this. I will make a better attempt sometime in the future thought Unless this one ends up being considered good enough, that is.
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Dogster Posted Feb 1, 2009
Actually I think it's one of the most exciting and innovative computer games around. I just wish I had some time to devote to it. Last summer I put in maybe 10-15 hours and I feel like I only just scratched the surface.
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MMF - Keeper of Mustelids, with added P.M.A., is now in a relationship. Posted Feb 1, 2009
A perfect example of Darwinism in action?
Survival of the fittest, but the weakest not accepting a 'fait accomplis' and clinging on?
Give up gracefully! It is easier!!!
MMF
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manored Posted Feb 1, 2009
I know, I already gave up the entry to peer review and will keep giving up entries until one is accepted. I cannot guarantee, thought, any kind of consistency in the frequency nor quality of the entries
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Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Mar 27, 2009
This Researcher seems to have elvised, last posted February 4th. Move to FM?
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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Mar 27, 2009
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