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Entry: The Interesting Thoughts of Edward Monkton - A44515569
Author: Fate's little sister - U13711455

I'd be glad to add anything else you think might be relevant to this entry. Thanks

Hi there link's go in like this type text in here and
Edward Monkton official website
Could you maby tell us a bit more about some of the character's you have told us about as Id like to know more
I hope that help's with your entry and weldone

Noth€r (scout)

I think guide entry has got full potential, however, it lacks a bit of information.
That doesn't mean it is not good but all it needs is a bit more information about your subject.

Well done for getting straight into GuideML.
Have you popped into the <./>GuideML-Clinic</.> yet? It explains a lot of GuideML to you.

Thank you very much for your input! I have added a bit more, I think it is looking a lot better now.

Thanks for the information on links, makes it much more neat and tidy.
Emma

Thank you!
I am not sure if I need to write a reply to both of these posts or if you'll be notified of my first reply, but to be sure I'll do two!

I was finding it quite hard to summarise what are mostly four line poems, so I decided elaborating, describing more fully would work better, I hope the tone is not too tongue-in-cheek because of this.

Emma

Great work so far.

You could instead of using links in footnotes and use the names as links.

Sorry I should have been more clear on that. This is what you need to do:

Giles Andreae


Edward Monkton

You don't need to write at the beginning twice, you only need to do it once.

You have a small typo under 'Characters' >> "Freind A" << = Friend



Also, under 'Themes' can you separate and list items as:

1.
2.
3.

It will look far neater

Hi there, welcome to h2g2.

I have to say, this is a pretty good little entry for a first-timer! Congratulations.

I have a 'The Lady and the Chocolate' mat. I also have 'Interesting Thoughts...' as my iGoogle background - don't know if you want to mention that it's available there. It's not all that relevant, I suppose. I usually seem to get Zen Dog or the hamsters, for some reason.

You know what, I thought to myself, ah this is a bit of fluff. Horrible, eh?

But then I went following your links, and loved it.

The Entry is good stuff, I thought it might have been a bit light on for content, and perhaps just a list of things, but all in all there's not much more that can be said, unless you want to delve into philosophy...

P'raps not eh?

Anyway, as said, great stuff for a first Entry, I don't know if it really needs anything more, because that would take away from the simplicity of the subject matter itself.

Stick around Emma, enjoy hootoo, and with time hopefully you'll see this Entry in the Edited Guide

Matt

Hello there

I hope you don't mind but I have come up with a few nitpicks.

Could you please state who said the first quote.

There's no need for quotation marks.

I wonder whether it would be possible to perhaps link to other Entries here on h2g2 that are edited.

Be aware of spelling 'Contstantly' could be easily changed to its correct spelling of 'constantly' just by using spellchecker.

May I suggest that when it comes to writing <<"florid" >> that you may like to use single quotation marks instead. Please do the same with the words 'friends' and 'madness'.

Please do keep writing This is good

Is this still in PR?

I'm with Matt on this one - delightfully simple. The Sub-editor can fix anything outstanding.

Icy

I didn't realise this was still here either.

Hey
I haven't been around for a bit, wow finding time to do everything is hard! I have had a look at the things you've been mentioning and I think it should be ok now.

I will come back an delve into philosophy next year, as I'm starting at uni doing PPE in September!

I agree, no reason it should be languishing here! Looks done to me - for a first Entry. There's nothing wrong with the content, and the formal things can be fixed by a subbie

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

Congrats on your first Entry! Here's to many more

Well done on making it into the Guide

Looking forward to seeing more from you.

Opti

Hi there Fate's little sister

I've just finished sub-editing your entry, the 'Recommended' version of which you can find at <./>A48150939</.>.

Please do have a look and let me know if it's OK or not, following which I'll send it off to the Editors for inclusion in the Edited Guide (see <./>EditedGuide-Process</.&gt.

Alex
Subeditor