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The Eternal Rewrite

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SeaMerlin

I did a bit of a rewrite of the first chapter. For those of you who have already read it; is it now better? I had run the prologue into the first chapter but I had rather glossed over how I came to be in such a singular situation (apart from the obvious mental instability/ emotional immaturity factors). So now the, short, prologue stands alone; does it work? Do you now understand something you didn't before; do you even care?smiley - biggrin

Happy new year,

SeaMerlin.


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