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Peer Review: A990038 - Fizzl's Flank Stroganofh
Fizzl Started conversation Mar 7, 2003
Entry: Fizzl's Flank Stroganofh - A990038
Author: Fizzl - U221039
Simple and quick, yet still delicious dish.
A990038 - Fizzl's Flank Stroganofh
Friar Posted Mar 8, 2003
Hi Fizzl
The recipe sounds nice, but I have a few comments. You start off pretty well. The layout was nice. Other than a few first person references, which are not accepted in the Edited Guide, it began well.
In the Process section though, you drop the format. Go back and insert some list points or paragraphs to make the article easier to read.
There are a few more points to writing a recipe article, but fix the format for the process and I'll get back to you.
Friar
ps. I make a "stroganoff" with sour cream instead of ketchup/tomato paste and mushrooms instead of cucumbers. . .want to try yours sounds good!
A990038 - Fizzl's Flank Stroganofh
Fizzl Posted Mar 9, 2003
Ah, yes, I was a bit hasty. I Should have read it couple more times. There are typos too.
I'll take it down for now and resubmit after carefull examination.
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