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Peer Review: A844698 - A guide to the secrets of Robots

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Researcher WizzKid

Entry: A guide to the secrets of Robots - A844698
Author: Researcher WizzKid - U205454

A guide to the secrets of Robots A844698


A844698 - A guide to the secrets of Robots

Post 2

Z

Hi I can see this is your first entry into PR and there's nothing wrong with the topic at all. Firstly you deal mainly with the Robots in ficition rather in real like. Not that that's a problem but you'd need to have it represented in the title really.

Also the whole thing needs a little more structure IMHO. I know that there's no minimum limit for guide entries but this does really need more to it.

The first person will have to go as well.

and something in the last sentance seems to hint to me that this isn't quiet finished! I do hope that you contribute more to the edited guide but maybe you could read the writing guidelines first next time A53209

As this is going to need a lot of work before it becomes edited guide material maybe you might want to consider moving it out of PR while you do the work.
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A844698 - A guide to the secrets of Robots

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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Well WhizKid? Would be a shame if this topic didn't get covered...

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Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Well, doesn't look like it was being worked on.

Back to entry?


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Back to entry smiley - ok


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