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EF: A87866194 - 'Going Postal' - the Television Series

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

A87866194

Lord Ventinari --> Lord Vetinari

Going Postal is the third and last Terry Pratchett television adaptation -->
Going Postal is the third and last Terry Pratchett live-action television adaptation

Principally among these is that -->
Principal among these is that

played by different actors than they had been in the previous adaptations --

this is clumsy and uses "different than" which is normally considered a grammatical error. You could say:

played by different actors to those in the previous adaptations

smiley - oksmiley - booksmiley - galaxy


EF: A87866194 - 'Going Postal' - the Television Series

Post 2

Bluebottle

Tweaked.smiley - ta

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