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Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation Dec 29, 2015
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A few dead links and typos in this one.
The link on "names" is dead. I can't find a suitable replacement one so this is best removed.
The references link to BBC China brings you to a news page that has not been updated since 2013. Probably best to remove this link.
bamboo, bone or ivory --> bamboo and bone or ivory
(trust me on this one)
Chrysantheum --> Chrysanthemum
discribed --> described
m-dashes should be changed to n-dashes - there are two in the first sentence.
EF: A6844520 - How to Play Mah Jong
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Dec 30, 2015
All done thank you Gnomon
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